Forgive me in advance for flooding your comment section with my words. This poem I wrote, are the summary of a question that have lingered in my head for quit some time. I really need to find an answer, at least one that would satisfy me for a short while.
If you don't mind, do share with your insight. I ask of this as it is my believe that you and others that ask are among the best enlughtened minds that I have ever had the chance to encounter.
I understand if u don't and wish thus deleting it.
I thank you in advance.
WHY AM I DEAD?
Hey mister, why so somber? the world is full with colour, live up enjoy the splendour.
It's because I'm dead.
No mister you can't be dead, your face id still red, look, even that wound still bled, and you look like a man well fed.
Really, I died.
Mister, why do you lie, I can tell from from eyes, I know you have just cry, how could you say you have died?
Boy here's why,
Could you feel that the air is so dry, and the soil beneath your covered with sly, and both fought seeking to be beautified, by seeping the river's blood dry, there's no more space for me forehead to shy.
Besides, I have nothing to sing.
no, not even one of 'em shining things, and me belly is no larger than a string, you know how 'em bitches love those shiny shiny things, on the head and the bellies of a dying king.
Yup, you're dead. and I better fled, being with you is most definately bad,.
am not too sure that i am among the best enlightened minds around and qualify to actually comment on ur deep poem. however, i sensed that as if u r writing about giving up on something.. or maybe frustration towards life or maybe even love?
anyways, i just hope u'll find ur answer soon!
fairygodmother:
the surprise? ermmm.. well... errmmm... naaaaah.. i'm not telling! :D
hope to see u at eddie's wedding!
thewailer:
waaah.. oi. oi.. siap..
what makes u think that i'm gonna tell u lar.. sorry dude.. hehehe.. :p
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Melady Binx:
Forgive me in advance for flooding your comment section with my words. This poem I wrote, are the summary of a question that have lingered in my head for quit some time. I really need to find an answer, at least one that would satisfy me for a short while.
If you don't mind, do share with your insight. I ask of this as it is my believe that you and others that ask are among the best enlughtened minds that I have ever had the chance to encounter.
I understand if u don't and wish thus deleting it.
I thank you in advance.
WHY AM I DEAD?
Hey mister,
why so somber?
the world is full with colour,
live up enjoy the splendour.
It's because I'm dead.
No mister you can't be dead,
your face id still red,
look, even that wound still bled,
and you look like a man well fed.
Really, I died.
Mister, why do you lie,
I can tell from from eyes,
I know you have just cry,
how could you say you have died?
Boy here's why,
Could you feel that the air is so dry,
and the soil beneath your covered with sly,
and both fought seeking to be beautified,
by seeping the river's blood dry,
there's no more space for me forehead to shy.
Besides, I have nothing to sing.
no, not even one of 'em shining things,
and me belly is no larger than a string,
you know how 'em bitches love those shiny shiny things,
on the head and the bellies of a dying king.
Yup, you're dead.
and I better fled,
being with you is most definately bad,.
Hey, I did told you am dead.
HMMM...Nice poem...errr..what does it mean, again? (sorry, I'm a tad bit 'slow' with all these artsy stuff)
Binx babe, I love you tooo! Errr..what's the suprise?!
oi you're keeping us on our toes! what was it? what was it? hahaha!
demonsinme:
am not too sure that i am among the best enlightened minds around and qualify to actually comment on ur deep poem. however, i sensed that as if u r writing about giving up on something.. or maybe frustration towards life or maybe even love?
anyways, i just hope u'll find ur answer soon!
fairygodmother:
the surprise? ermmm.. well... errmmm... naaaaah.. i'm not telling!
:D
hope to see u at eddie's wedding!
thewailer:
waaah.. oi. oi.. siap..
what makes u think that i'm gonna tell u lar.. sorry dude.. hehehe..
:p
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